Thursday, December 10, 2009

A Killing Glare Comments

Rating: 5.0

Keys unlock secrets
shredded on parched lips.
The day like spring in December
watching dead leaves swirl and crash
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Krissy Disillusion
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G. Murdock 27 December 2009

I like some of the lines in this 'give me the voice......our words tossed like fireflies....chiming insane verses.....and the closing two lines....you hold me and the din is silenced. Very romantic......You have a good descriptive voice.

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