A Killer Wants Justice Comments

Interesting write....I had to read it till the end.

interesting ending - what works with this poem is - it kept me going to the end wanting to know why and what would happen - sign of a good story teller

Herbert one writes what one feels, I have written many a crime poem over the years because I am am interested in criminology. I liked your poem it flowed well, I love to read a poem where the pen flows to make easy reading and this one did.

Aah, a poem to my liking. It sends chills up and down my spine, you're 10 awaits.

Did you write this from a pure fictional angle or did it realte to an actual happening? ? ?

Excellent Metre and I loved the last stanza. It is also good to see poets write from another view. Very nice.

Glad you submitted this one H: -)