A Kid's Oath! Comments
(composed on Universal children's day-2011)
I'm a lovely kid of my small house
With sprightly, sparkling eyes...
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When Papa says, 'you'll have to work', I keep on studying books... When Mamma says, 'it's time for rest' I pass her grateful looks... haha, , these lines remind me of my childhood, , , ,
Very pleasant, optimistic and delightful read dear Ms. Shahzia Batool Ji. I loved the way you have expressed your childhood experiences!
excellent write Shahzia offering hope for the future. nice
Beautifully portrayed Shahzia...Loved reading each lines...
well conceived, well portrayed! ! ! Actually i wanted to quote my favourite lines but then i thought i can't quote the whole poem in my comment.... :)) it's a fab poem! ! !
simple in diction, but cute in tone to suit to the mindscape of a kid! !
You understand, Shahzia, what it is you wrote, and much of why you wrote it. I will primarily take away that which tends to confirm my own experience. It is, incidentally, far more than enough- and quite beautiful.
beautiful poem dear Shahzia... you took me to my childhood...feeling nostalgic...
The kid who is still living in you is perhaps lost in the reminiscences of your long lost spring that quite hurriedly left you. Or else you are transporting yourself into the selves of many kids around you and are speaking for all of them. Also remember such kids want to live beyond this December and kindly don`t wish for their eternity or wait for their mere extinction.. This humility in a poet like has to be accoladed with all deserving praise. Long live overgrown poet prodigy Shahzia.
Wow one of yor best i soo enjoyd dis fabulous rhymin poem! So sweet on those growin children.
The child is the innocent one, but he/she has to grow up once. And most people do not became a Sultan.
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7/21/2025 12:54:37 AM # 1.0.0
A lovely innocent dream /oath having no blemish or scar..... very nice