Monday, July 23, 2007

A Kettledrum's Arena Comments

Rating: 5.0

There is gorse, of course, and furze growing across the moor.
The oak and ash are there in grouped confusion.
Tousled roaming horses, search for sources of grass, mature,
And the hawthorn and elm, remain standing in seclusion.
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Ernestine Northover
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David Threadgold 19 October 2008

Hi Ernestine. If I hadnt seen your name with this I would have known it was you, a true lover of nature seems to somehow have a distintive signature, and you have signed this one so well.10/10 Kindest Regards Dave T

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Mick Law 02 April 2008

The Yorkshire moors - you took me there and dropped me off for a while, and it felt so good - thankyou Mick

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Andrew Blakemore 27 February 2008

A wonderful, descriptive poem. You have a real eye for detail. Andrew x

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Daphne Grant 14 February 2008

hello Earnestine: The new Forest springs to mind as I read it. Some very intersting turns of phrase and alliteration here. Well done Daphne

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Ivor Hogg 22 August 2007

Beautifully descriptive of the open country I love. I used to roam the high moors when I was youg and strong Now I must rely on memory and poetry too stimulate scenes from the pasr

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Raynette Eitel 03 August 2007

This truly sounds like Longfellow...and seems a departure from your usual fare. I like it very much...I would love to have a painting of this one. It is rich in tone and imagery. Raynette

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Duncan Wyllie 01 August 2007

I can't remember a single occasion when I have read something by you that I didn't enjoy Oh..I know why that is...Because you're BRILLIANT! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Love duncan X

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Daniel Tyler 01 August 2007

The first poet I thought of when I read this was Henry Longfellow. The flow and purity of this piece subconsciously evokes him at his best. I love all of your images but the final line stands out especially well: 'And then again, there is the owl who’s always wise.' It says so much about the wisdom and order in nature. A delightful poem. Dan xxx

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Oh, what a brilliant comment from CJ - he really put his finger on it there! Ernestine this is astounding. We can visualise it indeed..... atmospheric and so incredibly and serenely and intricately depicted. One of your finest if I may say so, IMHO. t x

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Cecil (cj) Krieger 24 July 2007

You are an artist who paints wonderful pictures with a pen! AMAZING! !

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Patricia Gale 23 July 2007

Outstanding imagery Ernestine, reading it was like looking at a movie screen, well penned work!

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Emma Johnson 23 July 2007

A well-written piece with the accustomed expertise in nature description. Susie xxxxx

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