Her life had always been one in which a door would close
And another door or two would open...
Today she awoke and sighed with defeated weakness....
Pale and mortally exhausted by her diseased beliefs
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Tight, disciplined and penetrating work Ted. First class in all departments. Best, jim
This should be on the way to a major journal for publication! Two voices heard crystal clear, in one poem. Amazing, simply incredible. You've done it! xxxElysabeth
this is really good. there is tension and passion. that was from the heart right?