Thursday, May 31, 2007

A Junkie's Lament Over Having Been An Opportunist Like Cleopatra Comments

Rating: 4.5

Her life had always been one in which a door would close
And another door or two would open...
Today she awoke and sighed with defeated weakness....
Pale and mortally exhausted by her diseased beliefs
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Ted Sheridan
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Travis Richardson 07 November 2008

this is really good. there is tension and passion. that was from the heart right?

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Not a member No 4 08 June 2007

Tight, disciplined and penetrating work Ted. First class in all departments. Best, jim

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Elysabeth Faslund 06 June 2007

This should be on the way to a major journal for publication! Two voices heard crystal clear, in one poem. Amazing, simply incredible. You've done it! xxxElysabeth

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Archie Langford 31 May 2007

From whos born no traverler returns puzzles the will.

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