After a long wait, although it was four months only
When the jungle opened after monsoon season
The very first visit was amusing
The grass was lush green
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The trees are blustering oxygen and you have felt the freshness in this safari. A great worth this keeps with importance of mind and perception. A Jungle Safari is excellently penned....10
Fantastic presentation yet you need to work on rhyming part of the poem, Yes you chose free verses but what I feel is if you learn the rhyming scheme your poems will look like real poems.
What a lovely sight! Through this poem i can visualise the whole scene through your beautiful poem. At the single command of the mother All three jumped, rushed and gathered A joyful sight reminded me my last visit. Nature is wonderful! ............10
A place where men are in the cage and animals are open, so nicely described.
The playing of cute cubs in the national park has been amusingly depicted. To have a visit to national park after monsoon season is amusing. The inscription of the poem is too interesting. Brilliant poem. Thanks for sharing.
A beautiful narration on a jungle safari. If one has the knack to it, every move in the jungle is a matter for enjoyment. Thanks for sharing a touching experience.
Thanks much, I am a regular visitor since 1989 and it gives me immense satisfaction when I see the wild animals in their natural habitat. The joy of watching them roaming free and doing things as they ever wish to. We have around 6 national parks not very far from my place and it is known to be Tiger capital of India.
A forest always presents a medley of beautiful scenes and experiences! The ground shaded with the thick foliage of trees serves as a cool shelter and the air will be pure and pristine, reverbant with the melodious song of birds! If luck favours, as in your case, one can spot tigers and elephants at close quarters. Such sights might cause terror in us, but seeing tiger cubs playing amid bushes is a curious sight! Beautiful description.....!