A Jungle Home Comments

This poet know to make a real dune Daughter rushed out, yelling, cockroach in her room, Silly thing after all, I killed it with a broom. Then I saw my pet cat after a rat, for that only I groom, To kill and banish and make our life, all bloom. very realistic

Humour in the jungle home with critters crawling and everything knows its place good poem with lines to dicuss cheers regards

A nice expression, all creation is integradted let we love and give right them to live.

Fascinating, rather humorous contemplation. Your conclusion reminds me of a friend who tenderheartedly treats all, with no exception for even the vile mosquitoes...yet I think they are only pests for man's torment, and do not deserve such kindness. Some insects indeed are very admirable and helpful, but mosquitoes? I quite enjoyed this contemplation...the scenes it created and the amusing discussion. Lovely.

Serious as the subject you deal with here, the medium you have used are everyday things that are part of most of our lives. Very beautifully penned. It's 10 from me.