Friday, April 16, 2010

A June Night Comments

Rating: 3.1

Ten o'clock: the broken moon
Hangs not yet a half hour high,
Yellow as a shield of brass,
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Emma Lazarus
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Francie Lynch 24 June 2017

Good poem, but I think Wordsworth's The World Is Too Much With Us is a superior poem on a similar theme. Cheers.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 24 June 2017

A lovely night poem. Thanks for sharing.

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John Richard Anderson 24 June 2017

Very nice imagery and expression. I enjoyed this poem. Cheers!

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Nathan Coppedge 24 June 2017

I would at this to a list of intuitive poems if I could.

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Mario Vitale 24 June 2017

great writing with exquisite taste

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 June 2017

Beautiful poem on summer night. Thrilling expression like... Earth lies in the shadow still; Low black bushes, trees, and lawn Night's ambrosial dews absorb; Through the foliage creeps a thrill, Whispering of yon spectral dawn And the hidden climbing orb. Higher, higher, gathering light, Veiling with a golden gauze All the trembling atmosphere, See, the rayless disk grows white! Hark, the glittering billows pause! Thanks for sharing.

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Anil Kumar Panda 24 June 2017

Beautiful poetry. Each stanza is a gem. Thanks for sharing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 June 2017

Spectral dawn! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Pranab K Chakraborty 24 June 2017

Know that we are not alone, Though our open eyes behold Nothing save the moon's bright sphere, ............................................ absolutely except the trance of getting again!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 24 June 2017

Ocean's path of gold..... Thanks for posting🤓

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