Saturday, July 19, 2008

A July Night Comments

Rating: 5.0

Walking on the beach's cold wet sand
Holding on to your lover hand in hand
The breeze brings ripples to the waters edge
The sun is going down, over the Earth's ledge
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Rhonda Baker
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Saadat Tahir 09 November 2009

hey i am surprised....no comments its actually a beautiful poem fantastioc old world charm and yet as fresh as the sea breeze... wafting past u very well written and touching...(ur poems are scattered all over the year..a diff style...will do sm later) cheers and ten

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