Monday, October 16, 2006

A Judge Of Character Comments

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Your confidence smiles in sunlight,
Just the way you walk.
Augmented to sky’s heights,
The moment you talk.
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ARSHAJ GAIKWAD
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Nalini Hebbar 01 November 2006

arshaj...i loved the last two lines...i too believe it is best to walk away with determination from something that has the power to ignite uncontrollable emotions in you...the pull will destroy not bcuz of 'it' but bcuz of 'you'...great thoughts well put...the third line goes off beat since you tried to rhyme...you do need to tighten and revise it...love...nalini

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Priyanka Shinde 30 October 2006

too gud! ! one of the few times when thrs nothing to comment but jus too gud..

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