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Seeing this as haihuetic in lenth and intent, , , disgust with using affection and love delteriously
This seems to be a mini version of 'A Seed Within. ' and that is not good to start with. Even this little verse is not clear to this reader in terms of total meaning. Perhaps, it is a language thing. But whatever it is, it isn't good. GW62
Poem is short & readablem Please go through my poems SHARE and FORGIVE.
Sound musical to my ears so rhyming....interesting to read so sweet and short...a right question...indeed a nice poem10
very interesting...i liked the way words have been ployed here...10
A lady said a man enjoys another man looking at his love, its the woman that can make it a torment, nice A joy.......oh the lady was Jane Austin regards uavanice1
when two or more people share a joy then how can anyone use it as a (gimmick) ploy it is a good write.
A thought provoking write, Samanyan, but there is too much left unsaid for me to figure out what it means. Carl.
nice poem :) ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !