* A Joy Comments

nice poem :) ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Seeing this as haihuetic in lenth and intent, , , disgust with using affection and love delteriously

This seems to be a mini version of 'A Seed Within. ' and that is not good to start with. Even this little verse is not clear to this reader in terms of total meaning. Perhaps, it is a language thing. But whatever it is, it isn't good. GW62

Poem is short & readablem Please go through my poems SHARE and FORGIVE.

Bravo! Fantastic job says so much my friend

It is very beautiful...10.. Tsira

It’s brilliant! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

A joy to ponder over, 10 Lynda xx

Have to think over that

Sound musical to my ears so rhyming....interesting to read so sweet and short...a right question...indeed a nice poem10

a wonderful question. shan

very interesting...i liked the way words have been ployed here...10

A lady said a man enjoys another man looking at his love, its the woman that can make it a torment, nice A joy.......oh the lady was Jane Austin regards uavanice1

when two or more people share a joy then how can anyone use it as a (gimmick) ploy it is a good write.

Interesting lines joy and ploy?

A thought provoking write, Samanyan, but there is too much left unsaid for me to figure out what it means. Carl.

Deep thoughts arise from these short lines..... a 10 from Fay.

Nice little lines friend, super 10

small sweet write pregnant with wisdom......

yes, how can any? but that's the order of the day!