Friday, May 15, 2009

! ! ! ! ! ! ! A Joy Ride On Mobike...! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Comments

Rating: 2.8

Arms around your waist,
And hairflying in the air,
That first joyride on mobike
On Delhi roads sealed our fate.
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Mamta Agarwal
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Priyanka Bhowmick 24 June 2009

ohh dis is lovely! ! u memorized my gone by days....i'll giv 10 for dis.

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Maitreyee Joshi 04 June 2009

a trendy joyful ride on the bike, that is a part of our lives when early on in love.and we do miss it so much later in life.i simply loved it.its so very sweet madam.thanks! it goes to my fav list

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Subroto Chatterjee 31 May 2009

Ah..sweet memories...and no regrets..make a great marriage..Now may be your son/daughter is (are) carrying on the tradition... Cheers. Subroto

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 25 May 2009

wow a romantic ride on motor bike.....................the beautiful emotions etched in memories.............A Good Write...........

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Vidi Writes 20 May 2009

In life, evrything has its unique hold Perfect emotions at every levels Inch by inch we say we grow and Things of the past takes rest at thoughts. Memorable but feeble to practice Time and again! ! What a life...? It's full of wonders. I like the feel in this poem. Very true, very mature. Thank you.

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premji premji 18 May 2009

true love is absolute madness.......................

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Sandra Martyres 17 May 2009

A lovely poem bring back romantic memories and linking them to the present so imaginatively...10++ again

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Raj Nandy 16 May 2009

A very nice poem with a happy blend of realism and poetic imagination! 10 + -Raj Nandy

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Marilyn Lott 15 May 2009

Sweet, delightful memories, Mamta. Sometimes we can go back and sometimes we cannot. But we have our wonderful memories that we can revisit over and over again. A '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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that did give me a feel of watching a romantic movie...the end was indeed superb

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Kesav Easwaran 15 May 2009

Sweet reflections, Mamta...loved the way you end your poem there...10

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