Thursday, April 16, 2009

* A Joy! Comments

Rating: 5.0

It’s a joy smelling to high heavens
At day’s end, tending my garden
Dressed in mud
Kissed by the sun
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Deva De Silva
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Nimal Dunuhinga 30 April 2009

Your drawing of nature really gives the joy!

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Anjali Sinha 30 April 2009

oh yeah I too can smell your joy tending my gardens for you its now resurrection time a time when dead wood gives birth to new grass. a lovely poem dear Deva -10 anjali (do read mine Megalomania and A falling Star)

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AtreyaSarma Uppaluri 29 April 2009

Dear Deva De Silva, You've spread an infectiously joyous atmosphere, through the various moods and movements of joy in your lyrically graceful poem. Love.

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Viola Grey 26 April 2009

I have to wholeheartedly agree with your second stanza...and the ending was lovely.

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Maya Hershey 23 April 2009

beautiful poem, i liked it. it describes everything. its not vague its wonderful, more than perfect. keep on!

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Mona Martinez 22 April 2009

lol. lovely poem. i love the sense of humor in such a well written poem.

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very much joyful full of happiness and glee 10/10 Nicholas

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Allemagne Roßmann 21 April 2009

Joyful contours and carnivals for your poems too..........10+++

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Lalitha iyer 21 April 2009

It is a joy to comment upon, when somebody outpours full of Joy.

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Shelby Jasmin Estrada 20 April 2009

I like how this poem talks about how to be free without anyone caring, and doing as you wish. It's a lovely poem. Fantastic job of metaphors and such. :)

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~ Jon London ~ 20 April 2009

Lovely flowing lines of joy, and such a pleasure to share with your readers. A total joy

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Melissa Pelletier 20 April 2009

It was a joy to read this poem, words flow nicely, made me feel good!

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Naidz Ladia 20 April 2009

it's a joy writing some words to express our feelings... it's a joy to know that this piece of yours are nice...

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Cristy Upshaw 20 April 2009

Oh wow, what a beautiful and enlightening piece. What great imagery and uplifting words.

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Sandra Fowler 20 April 2009

The joy of being arfully and beautifully expressed. I am warmed by your sunny images. Lovely... Kind regards, Sandra

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Keith Parsons 20 April 2009

That's right...I feel the same way. I have something that I truly enjoy doing. Very lively and uplifting!

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Ruth Walters 20 April 2009

I can feel the joy you felt when you were writing this piece and I hazzard a guess it didn't take you very long to write it? It came from your heart and I love your free spirit and your humour. : -D Ruthy

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Fiona Davidson 20 April 2009

Wonderful write Deva...beautiful images you paint....Fi 10+++

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Barry A. Lanier 20 April 2009

'the less valuable a joy the more valuable it is'

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Ted Sheridan 20 April 2009

People can steal anything you own but they cannot steal your joy. Wonderful poem.

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