Thursday, March 27, 2008

A Journey Without Destiny Comments

Rating: 4.6

The voices of hope......
Screaming for lives..
Were not fulfilled
The truth is
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof
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Debora Duwa Mtambalika 18 July 2018

This poem carries a big lesson in it. I really love it

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Sare gerwin 16 July 2018

I love it , and it means a lot

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Madhabi Banerjee 11 April 2016

amazing! thanks for sharing

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Ro'ya Abdulaal 02 September 2009

Catching title once again and the poem is very touching. Well done 'The truth is we can't handle the truth' my favorite part

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Evaughn Gray 28 February 2009

i can't explain to you how beautiful this poem is.. all i can say is utterly amazing..~Hazel G.E

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Naidz Ladia 09 December 2008

DESTINY, , , , everybody has its own...it depends on how you drive yourself into the destiny you wanted to be...uhummmm...another poem i read from you...can i kiss u for being a talented and gifted poet? mmmmmmuah, thats not a reward, , , , but its not a punishment ha..its just a sort of saying GOODNGHT...

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Naru Kaede 02 December 2008

Wow, this poem is so great! But unfortunately, we all have destiny to do, If I have many choises without destiny, , I'll pick up the happy ending one, , Everyone either, , But the truth, we have to face the truth, , Love this one! Regards, Naru Kaede, ,

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Zaarah Jasmin 28 November 2008

well written! exellent poem, :)

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Anjali Sinha 15 September 2008

very true 'The truth is We can't handle the truth' +10 anjali

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Peggy Sweet 21 August 2008

This poem caught my eye because I hav a daughter named Destiny. I could not fathom my life's journey without my Destiny. Great piece of work and I marked it as one of my favs.

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Mamta Agarwal 13 August 2008

title caught my eye. a fine poem, deeply reflective and thought provoking.10 Mamta

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Issam Hal 12 August 2008

really i tried so hard to find a poem of u that i will understand easily and completely coz really my english is not good enough maybe im better in arabic. but i found this and i liked it so much really so so great and i think that i fell in love with it and im sorry so sorry coz i did't take ur excuse. im sorry.

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Penge Wa Kimbombo 12 August 2008

too true. too too true. VERY true!

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Sarwar Chowdhury 28 July 2008

Yes i get it.....cleverly composed. 10 has been clicked with joy!

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Dipika P 25 May 2008

'splendid'...keep writing like this :)

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Csdb Kind 24 May 2008

I understand but disagree.. I went, , I got lost, , I ran away into space and went psychotic.. But for that I found myself, , , Go, , , , or don’t, , But speak not if not..(only metaphor) Nice read

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Anita Grassrope 06 May 2008

wow fullfill your destiny, heart and soul i love your poetry you have lot of energy in a state of mind. i like it. nice n deep poet.

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Luis Gil 06 May 2008

Determination needs direction. Truth is a beautiful ancient empty vase which has been lost and nobody remembers what it looks like.

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Abha Sharma 24 April 2008

‘ Will’ and ‘Destiny’, our life is a pendulum between so many ends man is a puppet in the hands of Fate…. The lines here are deep in meaning….well composed.

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Ozzie Widuch 22 April 2008

really liked this one, keep up the good work

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