A Journey Unknown Comments

A truly insightful and inspirational write! We should not make our life a meaningless journey like that of empty can thrown into the stream and going with the flow.To quote a few lines from this wonderful poem- - How many other bottles or cans will make this same journey? As insignificant As the bottle may seem, it can be compared with our own life’s journeys as we grow. We must not allow ourselves to become that bottle or can that is tossed aside with an un known journey. I am glad that your comment on my poem drew me here to find the treasure of your work.

Really like this. We are all on a journey. Its where ever it takes us. Good poem.

nice one u got there dear. keep it up

Very well written with so much truth in it. A lot of people are in a journey unknown, destination unknown too, no direction and no plans, just going with the flow. wish they will see this, read and mend their ways.

wow im speechless keep writing your talented

Wow this was a wanderful write. I missed reading your work Djean