Tuesday, March 17, 2009

A Journey Through The Awkward Seas! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Life is not secure
With tragedies
And miseries
All around
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Surayya Abbas
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Sandra Fowler 21 May 2009

Wonderful title. Your perception is 20/20.10, for you. Kind regards, Sandra

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Saadat Tahir 19 April 2009

very very nice...really saadat

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Bob Blackwell 18 April 2009

The only way we can live life, is live it as it comes deal with each moment when it arrives. I like the way you express yourself so simply like the coracle which is quite a simple boat. You are a compassionate lady.

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Amin Khan 10 April 2009

Your poem reflects: Deep study, High expressions, Poor situation and rich views. Simply nice. Amin.

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Faran Khalid 05 April 2009

Good Work.... I like it.

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Joseph Teo 03 April 2009

'To sail through the awkward seas In coracle of reverie.' I liked that (: Awesome usage of words.

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Bob Blackwell 29 March 2009

We must always do what is right, but it helps if we realise that everything changes given time. A thoughtful and well writtten poem

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Sharon Ogwel 25 March 2009

spot on and very insightful.

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James B. Earley 24 March 2009

An analytical view of life's complexity! Excellent rendition.

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Estrella Baldemosa 22 March 2009

enlightening...thank you

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Satheesan Rangorath 22 March 2009

A thoughtful poem with a fine message. You put your world intellegently. One can keep it for a reference. Greetings Satheesan rangorath

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Greenwolfe 1962 22 March 2009

This is so true. People have the resources within themselves to survive the worst things that can come our way. A very powerful message is contained in this piece. GW62

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Mohammed Albalushi 22 March 2009

i really enjoye reading it, will done

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Breeanna Mcelmurry 22 March 2009

you are so rite on that. good work

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Meggie Gultiano 21 March 2009

Poetry at its best..a well penned piece. thanks for this

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Hello There 21 March 2009

Hey, great work! Keep it up, bro.

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Reihaneh Jalalian 21 March 2009

that was very beautiful. thatnks for sharing this great poem

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Lalay Allan 21 March 2009

Beautiful poem. Well-penned and very nice flow of thoughts.

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Barry A. Lanier 20 March 2009

wonderful flow with a message of wisdom

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Sally Minns 20 March 2009

very nice. loved the way the words went so well together

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