Life is not secure
With tragedies
And miseries
All around
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The only way we can live life, is live it as it comes deal with each moment when it arrives. I like the way you express yourself so simply like the coracle which is quite a simple boat. You are a compassionate lady.
Your poem reflects: Deep study, High expressions, Poor situation and rich views. Simply nice. Amin.
'To sail through the awkward seas In coracle of reverie.' I liked that (: Awesome usage of words.
We must always do what is right, but it helps if we realise that everything changes given time. A thoughtful and well writtten poem
An analytical view of life's complexity! Excellent rendition.
A thoughtful poem with a fine message. You put your world intellegently. One can keep it for a reference. Greetings Satheesan rangorath
This is so true. People have the resources within themselves to survive the worst things that can come our way. A very powerful message is contained in this piece. GW62
that was very beautiful. thatnks for sharing this great poem
Wonderful title. Your perception is 20/20.10, for you. Kind regards, Sandra