Saturday, September 20, 2008

A Journey Not Taken Comments

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Death seemed my servant upon the road,
Where every footstep echoed casually,
And no waylay would come unto my heart-
No frozen peaks of truth,
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Lazarus Knix
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At the beginning life's road seems like a long journey but when you start looking back after stumbling over many road blocks you realize the value of life's lessons...keep on truckin......a ten from me! ! ! ! ! I gave you my answer to your forum question...

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Janell Cressman 25 April 2009

i like it you should read my poem nowhere to go thanks! ! !

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 26 December 2008

Nice! I like the flow of this. The title is a 'knock out'.

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Richard Prosper 30 September 2008

This journey is described so well that I heard the footsteps walking up the slopes of destiny. Very thoughtful poem. For every poet, their words create a scene, because every poet knows their life is but a dream

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