Tuesday, October 27, 2009

A Journey For Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Inferno's flame envelopes whole, the sky.
Its endless movement sears her soul.
Her air is thin, compressed, withheld.
Hand to chest, no beat is felt.
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Samantha Williams
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Adi Cox 27 October 2009

This is a very nice poem. It has a good rhythm to it as it is read and there seems to be a wide scope for interpretation of meaning to it, also there seems to be hope in the poem. Excellent writing 10/10.

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