Monday, March 22, 2010

A Journey Called Life Comments

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A miniscule sperm I was,
When I entered the womb
Ran fleetly beating my counterparts
Searching the land of pleasance for solace
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SREEJITH KULAPARAMBIL
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Amartya Roy 27 May 2010

Wow! ! really very lovely poem.... nice constructed words...

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Sandhya S N 12 May 2010

form the flow of verses form the begining to the end the lines gives the message to explore the soul regards sandhya

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Maitali Khanna 12 May 2010

the poem very tersely conveys the message would like to tell you that you, ve verbalized my thoughts.... this poem seems to me an extension to my poem 'oh that journey, my journey'...thank you.

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Seema Chowdhury 19 April 2010

very nice and deep poem. you have explained every stage of life in a very perfect manner. thanks for sharing this poem. thanks for your comments too.

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Kee Thampi 22 March 2010

I saw a sage meditating at the Ghat I knelt before him for his divinely grace He chortled, and said “search your real face, The moments forgone will never return This is life’s lesson that one should learn Life is a chance for seeking essence of soul, in search of a great soul....

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