A Journey Comments

A very nice and praiseworthy poem. Thanks dear Seema for such beautiful a poem. I loved these lines most. There I laugh at unfortunate time Marching towards its grave as past I know your touch shall heal my age Vanish the wrinkles of depression And crumble the bloated ego of time

There I laugh at unfortunate time Marching towards its grave as past I know your touch shall heal my age Beautiful lines, expressing eternal and divine love. Thanks dear poet.

lovely poem Seema- very touching and eloquent. Mamta

There I laugh at unfortunate time Marching towards its grave as past I know your touch shall heal my age Vanish the wrinkles of depression....... bring me all happiness and laugh..... i m quite impressed with words and its prersentation.....10 read mine o.mother ahd butterflies around

'There I curse the prolific gardens Their opulence unbearable and sick I hide my swathed feelings within And envy those flowers and vines I know they all will lament and die When you arrive more enchantingly than spring! ' A marvelous poem- a marvelous journey.

This is beautiful Seema, simply beautiful.

Great poem so beautiful and well crafted.................10

What a flow of words! Very good.

felt good reading your journey while the skyscape assumed new beauty associated with monsoon...

wow! ! seema such a beautiful poem............10! !

flows like a resonant river! ! ! ! ! ! !

Well written young lady

this poem is a journey in itself, a beginning and an end, , and in between there is so much introspection, a poem where head and heart are in perfect balance, hence a very balanced love poem, love triumphs at the end of teh day. a different poem from seema's repository, , thanx

quite vivid write indeed with lots of passion and love floating in the lines.....thanks 10+++++ 'Each time I inhale and exhale Again and again forcing the utterance of your name! '-simply bravo'ssss rgds asif

very vivid and full of life.. written with zeal and confidence...flows from within...cheers an thanx