Two hearts travelled, parallel in life,
Though, several nights and days came and gone.
You and I remained alone, though people came and gone,
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The phrase "caravan of life" really captures an image. Thank you for your poem.
The truth of life and relationships so beautifully expressed in both English and Hindi through this interesting poem.5 starsg
Reached several milestones and kept proceeding, When looked back at the journey, saw the mist and smoke.------ This is such wondrous writing, letting your reader into your heart and mind while at the same time creating atmosphere and environment... 5 stars
Marvellous poem on the journey of love and life. Parallel journey of two hearts never meet anywhere. When looking back on the journey only fog and smoke are seen
A poem of great depth. So thought provoking. A beautiful and well crafted poem.
Yes we should not miss the opportunity to speak our heart out.