Birth from mother’s womb,
Blessed with heavenly bloom,
Signalling arrival where I belong,
With sorrow and sometimes a song.
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Yes your last two lines epitomise the the basic truyh of life! Happiness though short lived, always makes up in height, what it lacks in length! - Raj Nandy
As beautiful words to be written from a wholesome earthly being sends a reminder for the rest of the world to read. A wonderful poem and very well crafted give you 10. Best wishes Suzan Gumush
Those who named you Vidyadhar, holder of wisdom, knew your essence Thank you
Vidyadhar, I have but a few words to say. Writing a jewel like this once is a credit, but to keep on writing them is talent. Just keep on writing them my friend. Top marks and thanks for sharing them. David
'With sorrow and sometimes a song.' ............................... Beautiful and wise poems... Here whole divine a cycle, births, death and eternity/// Kindest regards? Tsira
While looking beyond perfections Happiness stars dwelling within It’s a reward to that wise man Who appreciates what he has Than running after what not. Good subject. Thank you.
Yes I agree; A nice composition. Also as unrevealing as you. Thanks for sharing; a nice welcome back from a long trip back to the norm.
Nice work done here.. it is true 'happiness ' is the jewel in once 's life and without its presence life is dead as a rotten piece..
true...in life what is cherished and valued is happiness only... if life is a crown happiness is the jewel... and on death one is dethroned... loses crown and least to say about jewel... a poem short in construction but elaborate in content... a ten for vidyadhar
This is a 'gem' that continues to sparkle brighter from its birth. Very nicely composed, Vidyadhar.
I like the image of happiness being a jewel in the crown of life's cycle, ... indicating that it is not ALL that life is about, but merely one of the jewels... nevertheless a precious stone... good poem.
You have rightly said that 'happiness is like a jewel' and it surely is, with everyone striving towards it. Thanks for this poem and the thoughts it inspires.
Even I do believe that happiness is all what we gain… no materialistic pleasure can replace the happy moments… Life is all about struggling for it, all phases of life targeted towards it… very well composed
spreading joy with just presence...no need for words...beautifully expressed...enjoyed reading......Vallerie Lobell
Very well said..happiness is a crown...simple diamond.10