Sunday, February 8, 2009

A Jerk In The Banking System Comments

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I visited the bank today,
a deposit to be made;
an un-nerving experience,
that I fouled up I’m afraid.
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chris dawson
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Greenwolfe 1962 20 February 2009

This one needs a spell check on one word. This poem was described as if it were a visit to a doctor. So I assume this was no ordinary bank, if you know what I mean. That makes this writing a little too obscure for my taste but it also makes it quite funny. All in all, I suppose that funny is best. GW62

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Keith Foley 08 February 2009

love it, great work, quick witted.

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