Wednesday, February 1, 2012

A Jelly Ate My Sister (A Poem For Children) Comments

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A jelly ate my sister,
when she tried to take a bite.
She’s floating around inside it,
but she looks like she’s alright!
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Jojoba Mansell
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Adeline Foster 28 February 2012

Fun, fun! Humor is such a lovely way to begin writing poetry. I see that you make the best use of it. Read mine - If Only - Adeline

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