Friday, July 8, 2011

A Jasmine In My Garden. Comments

Rating: 5.0

In my garden i grew jasmine,
Grew bigger and it covered the roses,
As its sweet fragrance melted my skin,
So it left my heart thumping like a sound running horses,
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Shamba Kaunda
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Saadat Tahir 09 July 2011

u r in love with flowers... and it shows.... nice lines... :) sat

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Shamba Kaunda 09 July 2011

Unwritten soul love has turned people into so many things im glad it turned me into a poet thanx for yo comment.

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Unwritten Soul 08 July 2011

Sweet is the first word cross my lips, it so nice and i like the flow and the way you spice up the feelings in this write, it sweet :) _Unwritten Soul

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