Friday, April 27, 2018

A Jasmine Flower's Lovesong Comments

Rating: 5.0

When the eastern blaze sets in the west
And the silver moon rises the best
I open up in all lovely white
At the sight of my love above bright
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Indira Renganathan
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Valsa George 15 May 2018

Pretty my beauty white fragrant nice Sheeny his cooling sight matching nice Tell me now o' my friend when your girl Hasmeon herlonglockshowyoufeel......................... Beautiful lines! I love to see a young girl with Jasmine flowers tucked in her long hair! A sweet scented write on Jasmine flowers which open their white petals in the moon light and perfume the night air!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 April 2018

Considering self as Jasmine of life and having fragrance of love motivate mind to a broader sense. Jasmine is natural very tender beautiful flower. There is Divine love sprinkled along with this flower. This poem is definitely very interesting poem very well penned...10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 27 April 2018

A lovely poem..so mellifluous. The beauty of the words impels one to dance and sing. Beautifully crafted and well executed write.10

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Dr Dillip K Swain 27 April 2018

I'm Jasmine I'm Jasmine I'm jasmine Aha fine aha fine Moon is mine.....so beautiful, so elegant! Loved reading this beautiful Jasmine poem! Thanks dear madam for sharing! Stay always blessed! (10)

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