Sunday, September 11, 2016

A Jar Comments

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M.J. Lemon
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Richard Wlodarski 05 May 2022

The gossips in town are usually shallow people. People who speak very little, and listen attentively, are the wise ones.

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M.J. Lemon 27 November 2023

Too true, Richard, too true. The worst ones are those who confuse gossip with some kind of wisdom.

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Muhammad Ali 26 September 2017

so many jars... empty containers and wide mouths and people like me everywhere, but just a little or... very littlle! ! very very beautiful way to say. it seems some jars are not very empty

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Mj Lemon 27 September 2017

Thank you, Muhammad, - so very much.

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Unwritten Soul 10 June 2017

WOW...this is a brilliant idea, yes we dont have to talk much although we can talk a lot...enough with some words, i love the analogy...and yes lot of people have a jar mouth and spill everything all out and made such a mess hahahahahaha....loved it M.J

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Mj Lemon 10 June 2017

Exactly, Soul! ! ! And you actually are right about how I got the idea....someone was talking non-stop and I was watching as that person poured peas out of a jar for dinner....I did the math, and got the idea. Thanks so much.

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Kevin Patrick 27 March 2017

A jar a vessel with potential to fill its contents but like a mind almost always empty thoughts are a jar Your filled with depth with just an inch, always detailed with just a line. My jars are filled with your brilliance. Fantastic M.J.!

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Mj Lemon 27 March 2017

Thank you so much, Kevin. And your Jar...just amazing!

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Lantz Pierre 18 January 2017

You couldn't possibly be from Tennessee, could you? Have a look at Wallace Stevens's poem, Anecdote of a Jar.

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Mj Lemon 28 January 2017

Thank you, Lantz. No, I am not from Tennessee, but I do have fond memories of visiting that great state. I'm about to discover Wallace Stevens....

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R Soos 18 November 2016

I can only handle so much laughing a day, so I enter your domain a little at a time. This one snuck up on me - I had to think it through for a second, and unfortunately was just putting coffee into my mouth when I got it. Now I'm hoping my keyboard is waterproof (coffeeproof?) - gotta go get something to clean this mess up with. Thanks! - Rich

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Mj Lemon 18 November 2016

Thanks, Rich! This is an awesome comment. So good that I was able to generate that laugh. There a few other poems I have that....well, make sure that coffee is safely out of reach. Thanks again.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 29 October 2016

Wow fine analogy u drew btw a human trait and a jar. Nicely done in brevity. Thumbs up. Great to read from u again.

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Mj Lemon 07 November 2016

Thank you so very much. I appreciate your visit.

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 October 2016

To know what is inside. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Mj Lemon 04 October 2016

And thank you for your kind remarks, Edward. I always appreciate your insights.

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Susan Williams 13 September 2016

oh, dear, there is a certain amount of conceit in we writers.... after all, we write thinking people will read what we have to say! ! ! ! I may very well be the widest mouthed jug here since brevity is not exactly my forte so I pour forth a lot of words.... thank you for the wry post, Mj. A 10 of course!

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Mj Lemon 13 September 2016

Susan, Thank you so very much. Yes, I am trying at times to see how much I can say in as few words as absolutely possible...Thanks so much for your support.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 September 2016

Wonderful explanation about a jar is shared here really. Wisely drafted interesting poem is.10

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Mj Lemon 11 September 2016

Thank you so very much!

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