Thursday, January 29, 2009

A Is For Arthur Comments

Rating: 2.8


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Arthur Q. Kromwelle
COMMENTS
Malcolm Bacchus 02 February 2009

This poem really reached out to me. Right when I needed it most. Thank you. You have a gift, use it!

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Florence P. Wordsmith 30 January 2009

I really felt this, and I get where you are coming from. Dwight would be proud.

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Leslie Ching 29 January 2009

I'm afraid I don't understand this poem at all. Do you mean 'beets, ' as in the vegetable beets? And how does A also stand for beets? Nor does it flow very well...I'm very sorry to give such a harsh critique, but it's very limited and 'unfeeling' for a poem. It might just be a misunderstanding on my part, but within my knowledge it's rather badly written.

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