A(I) 'Words, Comments
Did (I) tell on you?
NO!
Never tell on yourself, tell) it(to me, your (I) in you.
Did you wait, listen, think (I) have some thing to say? (I) don't.
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Dear, You are too clever to keep up with... I can´t follow some things... I´m not that smart, and my command of the English language isn´t good enough, though, I dare to dropp you some lines... I don´t know what you really mean by ' feet ' in the end of your poem... From what I gather, feet is the perfect place for love to flow... If men washed one another´s feet... Your wit speaks a lot... your personality speaks more than your words... You master the text in such a way that the words seem to be your servants...
A very different formation indeed...I enjoyed your collowquial narrative poetic expressions...thanks see you ///cheers
Clever. Whatever it is, the end line reminds me of whatever song it is that says 'Have Itold you lately that I love you'.... and for a reader to relate a piece to another piece has got to be a good thing. t x
yeah, you are forming your style, I think, special formation. and thank you for commenting on Swans for Life.
best write........i love a good confession.......... thank you for your kind sharing.
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8/11/2025 2:18:46 AM # 1.0.0
yea i know this situation very well....