A Hymn To Sun Comments

The third stanza is beautiful carrying so much strength morally to the theme...a good one as usual

a beautiful song written in the form of poetry..grace

the song in it is music alive

well written...................10++.........

this is truely a beautiful poem! i give it a 10

Great poem, I love it!

how could you do it? Your work is wonderful. Great thoughts and imagination

sunflowers cant help facing the sun....perfect..expression...

You've done it again.. Great work..

.. Nice one..... i liked it-passionate trees grow green O dear, since you received rain in the pathways of the circle sun the gate is for daughter and son

a piece that resembles the art of the ancient Greek and Egypt whereby the praising of sun is as their source of life...wonderful...i loved this the most!

wonderful lines for a life giving one.....well penned with a pleasant style of rhyme....sebastine.......

Ce poème décrit bien le soleil de Paris et les montagnes vertes ou le coeur rajeunit et oulbie ses maux. Un tableau pittoresque comme votre coeur et votre oeil mon ami.

Wonderful hymn to our life giving sun, well done, 10 Lynda xx

nice ode to the big star..an artful write...great one Ency Bearis

Great hymn to SUN the provider of light and life- foremost among the Gods! A great write!

You are full of inspiration and write impressive poem! Good work! Keep it up!

great.. really dunno what to say..

This leaves me with much to think about and figure out the meanings of what you are saying.

Beautiful...thanks for sharing.