(dedicated to Musica Viva Australia)
a river full of hopes
we fly peaceful flags
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Wonderful poem. The line loves come so eloquently change to: Love comes so elequently
Simple single lines stringing more hormonious....yours this talent I hope I too get into sometime....congrats
Nice flow and movement..a river of hopes much more than hope..I like.
This bounces with tunes, playing melodies down the page, great work..loved the rhymes
This bounces with tunes, playing melodies down the page, great work..loved the rhymes
All poem is fantastically penned and the lines 'spirit of light beautify our hearts' make it an instant classic, in my opinion. Surely goes to my favoutites. Pure magic. Best wishes. A.
wonderful write...lovely vision on love...great imagination...very pleasing to heart, mind and spirit..inspiring piece on faith, hope and love...10+++++
That's a great work which comes from another great work plus great imagination.. Nice..
Your poem is beautiful and full of feeling..... I love the night sky and stars......10
With Vincent Van Gogh being one of my favorite artists, I could not pass up reading this fine poem, Ahmad. In words, you have tried to capture what he did in colors. The painting itself that you referred to is the one I chose for the cover of my recently issued second book of poems, and it is often referred to as the first of his three famous starry night paintings, the most famous of which is the third one, which practically everyone has seen. Although mere words can never truly compare with a far more vivid painting, I think you did a good job with your words to describe what one might feel while viewing such a splendid painting. Carl.
This poem is very still and tranquil!