Tuesday, December 16, 2008

A Hymn To Star Comments

Rating: 4.5

(dedicated to Musica Viva Australia)

a river full of hopes
we fly peaceful flags
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Ahmad Shiddiqi
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Prince Obed de la Cruz 27 October 2009

This poem is very still and tranquil!

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Sherif Monem 23 July 2009

Wonderful poem. The line loves come so eloquently change to: Love comes so elequently

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Obinna Eruchie 14 July 2009

A interesting poem flowing with beautiful lyrics.

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Indira Renganathan 08 June 2009

Simple single lines stringing more hormonious....yours this talent I hope I too get into sometime....congrats

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Elaine Oxamendi Vicet 10 May 2009

Nice flow and movement..a river of hopes much more than hope..I like.

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~ Jon London ~ 04 May 2009

This bounces with tunes, playing melodies down the page, great work..loved the rhymes

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~ Jon London ~ 04 May 2009

This bounces with tunes, playing melodies down the page, great work..loved the rhymes

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Yelena M. 01 April 2009

All poem is fantastically penned and the lines 'spirit of light beautify our hearts' make it an instant classic, in my opinion. Surely goes to my favoutites. Pure magic. Best wishes. A.

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Cheung Shun Sang 06 February 2009

Very beautiful hymns

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Gargi Saha 12 January 2009

A wonderful poem. U get 10++...........

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Stephanie Fiddy 27 December 2008

beautiful poem! 10++++++++++++

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Miriam Maia Padua 27 December 2008

wonderful write...lovely vision on love...great imagination...very pleasing to heart, mind and spirit..inspiring piece on faith, hope and love...10+++++

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Seema Chowdhury 20 December 2008

lovely and creative work of yours.

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Sabrina Jubahar 19 December 2008

another beautiful work by you!

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Ramesh T A 19 December 2008

The Star's love magic lingers on in your poem! Nice!

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Kite Remedy 18 December 2008

That's a great work which comes from another great work plus great imagination.. Nice..

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Reshma Ramesh 18 December 2008

beautiful.........................

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Anjali Sinha 18 December 2008

nicely penned -10 anjali

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Linda Moore 18 December 2008

Your poem is beautiful and full of feeling..... I love the night sky and stars......10

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Carl Harris 18 December 2008

With Vincent Van Gogh being one of my favorite artists, I could not pass up reading this fine poem, Ahmad. In words, you have tried to capture what he did in colors. The painting itself that you referred to is the one I chose for the cover of my recently issued second book of poems, and it is often referred to as the first of his three famous starry night paintings, the most famous of which is the third one, which practically everyone has seen. Although mere words can never truly compare with a far more vivid painting, I think you did a good job with your words to describe what one might feel while viewing such a splendid painting. Carl.

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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