Monday, May 14, 2001

A Hymn To God The Father Comments

Rating: 3.1

Wilt thou forgive that sin where I begun,
Which was my sin, though it were done before?
Wilt thou forgive that sin, through which I run,
And do run still, though still I do deplore?
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John Donne
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Eguanei 23 November 2021

Gud

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LEVI 11 January 2021

Many Thanks

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Gregory Tuck 27 September 2020

I have always cherished this short poem, encompassing as it does, and in beautiful terms, the issues of original sin and Redemption.

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K booker 21 September 2020

Poet Sean Kelly What Is A God

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stevi navinskey 28 December 2018

that was a realy good speech

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Karabo mokoena 12 May 2018

This is marvelous and great 💞💜💓💔💕💕💖💗💗💝✋✌✊👌👌👎👍💟💛💚💙❤❤💋💋👅👄👏👏I can dwell on it

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Tenure 30 January 2018

Good love it is amazing and awesome love it love it love it

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Richard Wlodarski 09 October 2017

An absolutely stunning poem! Confessing to all his mortal sins. And being forgiven. And then, to confess to his fear of death. Not only is he forgiven, but he sees the light of Jesus. And his fear is gone. In Soul's Journey - Parts I - V, I write about my near death encounter with Jesus. So poems like this totally resonate with me.

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Ben Sasser 16 July 2017

Nice poem,

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Walterrean Salley 16 November 2016

(A Hymn To God The Father - Poem by John Donne.) Wilt thou forgive that sin which I have won Others to sin, and made my sin their door? ... I have a sin of fear, that when I have spun My last thread, I shall perish on the shore; But swear by thyself, that at my death thy Son Shall shine as he shines now, and heretofore; And, having done that, thou hast done; I fear no more. Gives me goose bumps. A prayer of penitence. Donne, conscious of his spiritual state, and his responsibility to God, seeks all forgiveness in preparation of his final moments of life- whenever that might have been. A prayer applicable to all. Well penned.

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Drew Wilson 30 October 2015

The last line is wrong. It states I have no more I fear no more also makes since. But there are critics that say he could be talking about his wife that died. Her last name as More before he married her. This poem was written 6 years after her death. The last line can very easily have two meanings. I have no more sin or lost love?

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Love and submission to god and forgive of sins wonderful poem and much liked.

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* Sunprincess * 09 November 2013

I hope God has forgiven John of all his sins... amazing I hope he forgives me of my past, present and future sins..

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Shahzia Batool 28 June 2013

a celebrated poem which shows Donne totally different from his love poems... depicting the last moments' fears of the consequence of sins he has been committing, so earnest he looks in his demand/request of forgiveness...Donne is EVERYMAN here! ! !

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Pranab K Chakraborty 28 June 2013

It's musing with such a classical tune, the sin already been diluted by the essence of virtue. Fantastic beauty of construction yet vibrating loudly through the nerves...... I feel the quality of creation which brings an piece of art beyond the particular timing zone. Thanks to PH.............................................................. Pranab k c

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Carlos Echeverria 28 June 2012

Donne seeking forgiveness for that which he was born into and continues to propagate-original sin. His writing is so brilliant, that his guilt is palpable.

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Kelvin Karani 28 June 2012

I fear no more! Awesome poem!

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Sw33t h3@rT 28 June 2010

I enjoyed the ending of this poem but definetly appreciated it a little more once i re-read it

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aMan Bloom 28 June 2010

This is classic trash that has done the world more harm than good.

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Joseph Poewhit 28 June 2010

Highlights nicely, with humility, at the ending, of having GODS son as our savior for our weak failings in life's lusts.

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