Tuesday, December 22, 2020

A Husband's Fate ...[ Response To A Poem By Lora Colon; Short; Marriage; Humor ] Comments

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When a woman offers a man her 'heart',
that man should beware...from the start.
Her heart comes with 'Strings Attached', &
when then, onto him, she' has TIGHTLY-latched,
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Bri Edwards
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M.J. Lemon 30 December 2020

This is a terrific poem, Bri. My obsesrvation may not be directly about the conent, but your words inspire me to realize...the older I get, the more I realize that even resting causes fatigue. A great verse, Bri. And Happy New Year!

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Kostas Lagos 23 December 2020

This is marriage... Quite accurate description

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Varsha M 22 December 2020

A bond between husband and wife needs to have strings to hold together but if that is strangulating that means it's time to discuss it. Togetherness and distance have to be equally balanced in this relationship in order to keep the relationship juicer and healthy otherwise what you described will really be born.

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