Monday, July 20, 2020

A Hunting Comments

Rating: 0.0

Ignore the roses' glory lass -
for this purpose you were born!
Virgin princess - you are needed
to catch the elusive unicorn!
...
Read full text

anais vionet
COMMENTS
Michael R. Burch 20 July 2020

I like your poem. I left comments and suggestions elsewhere. I think you are misinterpreting the mirror. Don't let the clowns win by giving them power over you. Take the power and reverse it, as battygirl and other ninjas would. Does battygirl let the Joker tell her who she is and how to feel about herself? Or does she toss the clown into a prison cell and throw away the key?

0 0 Reply
anais vionet

anais vionet

Paris, France
Close
Error Success