Monday, April 27, 2009

A Hunter Comments

Rating: 5.0

in the forest of life
a hunter kept searching
for a prey to stalk
and salt for a meal or two.
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kelvin karani
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Edward Kofi Louis 03 January 2016

Not an easy job! Nice work.

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Brian Jani 05 June 2014

Nice poem kelvin

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Kesav Easwaran 23 September 2009

hunting the shadow of desires...good poem...10

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Fiona Davidson 04 May 2009

Wondeful piece to read Kelvin....brilliantly written...10+++

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Tom J. Mariani 30 April 2009

I have never said this of anyone's poem before, and I never expected that I ever would. That said, your poem has the quality of a Wallace Stevens poem. You are not just waving the 'hunter' symbol around. Your control of how you use the hunter is remarkable. I will print and keep this one.

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