Wednesday, January 24, 2018

A Hundred Words Comments

Rating: 4.9

you wished, you would travel the world with me,
but didn't say a word,
how would I know what your thought was,
unless you opened your heart?
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 25 December 2020

Sometimes, more than words, an expression of the eyes speak the language of the hidden thought. A marvellous poem Malabika ji. Hope this finds you well. With warm wishes for a bright year ahead.

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Ravinder Soni 19 September 2019

मान गए टीचर जी आपकी जादूगरी को, भावनाओं का उल्लेख देखते बनता है मैं भी अँग्रेजी में लिखता हूँ दीवानों के मुआफिक मगर स्पेलिंग और ग्रैमर के हाथों मार खाया हुआ आप यूहीं लिखती रहें ,

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Malabika Ray Choudhury 28 September 2019

Wish I could read Hindi better! I am able to read, but not very fluent. My home-language is Bengali, and I wrote a few poems in that lovely and lyrical language. I have translated a few poems by Rabindranath Tagore, and would be delighted if you would like to read some of them! I read your biography, and found you have a lot of published works! Congratulations!

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Ratan Ghosh 26 August 2019

Lovely poem, beautiful expression. Not every feeling has words - very true To My favourite poem list

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To your favourite list! Thank you.

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Unnikrishnan E S 18 August 2019

Hi Malabika, Lovely poem. Wonderful expression “Not every feeling has words.” How true! !

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Thank you. Appreciate.

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Indira Renganathan 31 July 2019

Very insightful...beautiful way of expressing love....thank you for this lovely write Malabika

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Thank you, Indira! Appreciate your encouraging comments!

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Bri Edwards 05 May 2019

maybe i should be looking more deeply into the female eyes passing me on the sidewalks? but, no! i AM, after all, a married man. i like your poem. though i enjoy rhyming poems and usually right such...oops! WRITE SUCH...., i'd much rather have a well-written one, without rhymes, than a less well-written one full of rhymes. i really DID type " right" at first, in error. to MyPoemList. bri :)

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Thanks for including my poem to your My Poem List.

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dr.balnarayana bandam 15 June 2018

Every feeling can't be spoken, you don't need to. Just look deeper and deeper , very good poem Deeper the vision super is the clarity to understand-

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Thank you. Glad you agree with me - not every feeling can be expressed in words.

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Khairul Ahsan 26 April 2018

'Not every feeling has words' - so true! A nice poem, well done!

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Thank you, glad you enjoyed the poem.

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Balnarayana Bandam 26 April 2018

very good poem, the reality of human is study superficially to know the truth one must go deep here with presenting 10

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Thank you so much for the thoughtful comment and the beautiful rating. You are so right about going deeper in our minds.

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Chinedu Dike 30 January 2018

The subtle nature of communicative silence inherent in loving romantic relationships is aptly captured in the poem. An insightful rendition of words, lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing Malabika.

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Malabika Ray Choudhury 01 February 2018

I am delighted to share my feelings with my poet-friends. Yes, I wished to express the theme of communicative silence. Glad you think the chosen words render passionate feelings. Thanks.

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Malabika Ray Choudhury 01 February 2018

I am replying to your comments, but for some reason they are disappearing! Can you find out why? I am new to this site, still trying to figure out how things work. Thanks for all your thoughtful comments.

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Siddartha Montik 29 January 2018

Lovely Poem.. as if talking to self in a way and to our Thoughts! ! Deft imagination! ! thank you for sharing! ! Poet!

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Malabika Ray Choudhury 29 January 2018

Thanks so much. Yes, you are right... I was talking to myself, and then couldn't resist myself to pen down some words, which turns into a poem (hope so) ! Glad to share.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 28 January 2018

It's a lovely poem...neat expression! I would love to see more such poems with. a bit addition of poetic imagination! Thanks for sharing...10

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Malabika Ray Choudhury 28 January 2018

Thanks for your excellent review and helpful suggestion. Your guidance is very much appreciated.

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Colin Jeffery 27 January 2018

Beautiful music of a love that needed to be expressed and was not understood - - I found this poem was very good and opened memories for me.

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Malabika Ray Choudhury 28 January 2018

I am so glad my poem brought back some memories for you - that's what we aim for - to connect with the readers. I guess, I have been successful there. You got the theme of my poem - I was trying to be a little light-hearted about a serious theme! Thank you for taking your time to review my poem.

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