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you wished, you would travel the world with me,
but didn't say a word,
how would I know what your thought was,
unless you opened your heart?
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मान गए टीचर जी आपकी जादूगरी को, भावनाओं का उल्लेख देखते बनता है मैं भी अँग्रेजी में लिखता हूँ दीवानों के मुआफिक मगर स्पेलिंग और ग्रैमर के हाथों मार खाया हुआ आप यूहीं लिखती रहें ,
Wish I could read Hindi better! I am able to read, but not very fluent. My home-language is Bengali, and I wrote a few poems in that lovely and lyrical language. I have translated a few poems by Rabindranath Tagore, and would be delighted if you would like to read some of them! I read your biography, and found you have a lot of published works! Congratulations!
Lovely poem, beautiful expression. Not every feeling has words - very true To My favourite poem list
Hi Malabika, Lovely poem. Wonderful expression “Not every feeling has words.” How true! !
Very insightful...beautiful way of expressing love....thank you for this lovely write Malabika
maybe i should be looking more deeply into the female eyes passing me on the sidewalks? but, no! i AM, after all, a married man. i like your poem. though i enjoy rhyming poems and usually right such...oops! WRITE SUCH...., i'd much rather have a well-written one, without rhymes, than a less well-written one full of rhymes. i really DID type " right" at first, in error. to MyPoemList. bri :)
Every feeling can't be spoken, you don't need to. Just look deeper and deeper , very good poem Deeper the vision super is the clarity to understand-
Thank you. Glad you agree with me - not every feeling can be expressed in words.
'Not every feeling has words' - so true! A nice poem, well done!
very good poem, the reality of human is study superficially to know the truth one must go deep here with presenting 10
Thank you so much for the thoughtful comment and the beautiful rating. You are so right about going deeper in our minds.
The subtle nature of communicative silence inherent in loving romantic relationships is aptly captured in the poem. An insightful rendition of words, lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing Malabika.
I am delighted to share my feelings with my poet-friends. Yes, I wished to express the theme of communicative silence. Glad you think the chosen words render passionate feelings. Thanks.
I am replying to your comments, but for some reason they are disappearing! Can you find out why? I am new to this site, still trying to figure out how things work. Thanks for all your thoughtful comments.
Lovely Poem.. as if talking to self in a way and to our Thoughts! ! Deft imagination! ! thank you for sharing! ! Poet!
Thanks so much. Yes, you are right... I was talking to myself, and then couldn't resist myself to pen down some words, which turns into a poem (hope so) ! Glad to share.
It's a lovely poem...neat expression! I would love to see more such poems with. a bit addition of poetic imagination! Thanks for sharing...10
Thanks for your excellent review and helpful suggestion. Your guidance is very much appreciated.
Beautiful music of a love that needed to be expressed and was not understood - - I found this poem was very good and opened memories for me.
I am so glad my poem brought back some memories for you - that's what we aim for - to connect with the readers. I guess, I have been successful there. You got the theme of my poem - I was trying to be a little light-hearted about a serious theme! Thank you for taking your time to review my poem.
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7/24/2025 12:17:03 PM # 1.0.0
Sometimes, more than words, an expression of the eyes speak the language of the hidden thought. A marvellous poem Malabika ji. Hope this finds you well. With warm wishes for a bright year ahead.