Thursday, October 12, 2006

A Humourous Thought Comments

Rating: 5.0

I'll fight the position
That I was pushed into
Those enemies did come fast
Boy! was it all a blast!
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Greenwolfe 1962 26 January 2009

I'm not sure that you needed the last line about life. Sometimes, the less said is better as an ending. I'm big on endings. Otherwise, this is a very good poem. Well worth reading. I totally recommend it. GW62

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Alicia Patti 09 February 2007

p.s. I wrote one I know you would like: 'Elizabethan Nightmare', in case you have not read it yet. best, alicia

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Alicia Patti 09 February 2007

Oh, this is funny! I especially liked your pivot shift here: I'll fight the position That I was pushed into (Those) enemies did come fast. More like this, please! best alicia

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Jim Foulk 19 January 2007

lots of humor in this one, very nice write, and well said

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Nathan Strange 26 November 2006

'They couldn't connect to my sense of humour So they added all the extra rumours Turning me into a nut case of a woman' i really liked this line, the whole poem is alright but some lines pack more energy than others. hope u dont mind my honesty, then again i rarely like ppls poems anyway.

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Egal Bohen 24 November 2006

Very good Suzan, I have met a fellow believer! Egal...

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A. B. 27 October 2006

Life is one big Joke. We should laugh at it. Loved this one Suzan. Peace.

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A. B. 27 October 2006

Life is one big Joke. We should laugh at it. Loved this one Suzan. Peace.

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