Monday, November 30, 2015

A Humorous Poem Comments

Rating: 5.0

I write poetry not very often but I repeat them so,
I have very limited numbers to count,
Just one to twelve for long poems, sixty for short poems
And again, sixty for Haikus.
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M. Asim Nehal
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Poetic Sky 01 August 2023

Ha ha ha, surprise ending with twist I never got clue of it while reading.

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Mamta S 23 April 2021

Ha ha ha kept suspense till the very end.

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Valsa George 03 December 2015

I was wondering what you were saying! Only at the end came the real surprise! Quite witty and equally brilliant! A 10

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Kewayne Wadley 30 November 2015

Brilliant play on words. I like very much what you've done here. Nice usage of the essence of time blending with your story! KW

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Darren Jkoeryo 30 November 2015

Awesome poem with a suspense till end.....I liked you poem and will be saving it.

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T Rajan Evol 30 November 2015

Brilliant writing, Mr. Asim I really admire you writing skills.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 November 2015

Writing and repeating poems in different angels both sequences give nice thrilling on education. God blesses with wisdom and we all are definitely fortunate here. Interesting sharing.10

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

Nagpur
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