Thursday, June 25, 2009

* A Humbling Sight Comments

Rating: 5.0

A mountain hovers coyly,
Veiled by brittle grasses
From where I lay.
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Deva De Silva
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Yelena M. 04 July 2009

Wow..this poem makes me think of humbling sights and a mesmerising atmosphere of Caucasian mountains in my region. You have expressed emotion and nature so vividly in words! Thanks for sharing. A.

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Fay Slimm 26 June 2009

The clipped three-line presentation is ideal for this nature poem - - it stills the reading down to a peep with the writer into the landscape and to finally see the orange ball of a sun rise...... just lovely - - 10 + ++ from Fay

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rago rago 25 June 2009

writing about nature is a gift........ you have done it..........

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