A mountain hovers coyly,
Veiled by brittle grasses
From where I lay.
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The clipped three-line presentation is ideal for this nature poem - - it stills the reading down to a peep with the writer into the landscape and to finally see the orange ball of a sun rise...... just lovely - - 10 + ++ from Fay
Wow..this poem makes me think of humbling sights and a mesmerising atmosphere of Caucasian mountains in my region. You have expressed emotion and nature so vividly in words! Thanks for sharing. A.