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very nice poem...the choice of words..the flow and the context are all v nice the rhymes work very well liked

a very touching piece

Lovely, touchy poem with an appeal in the last stanza with a lot of? ? My 10 for it with love.

a deep cry for all the deprived souls..an earnest plea to the poet community to spread the word on these social atrocities

Dear Akram, A thought provoking and heart touching poem.This is an area to which people in affluence do not give any importance.Thank you for highlighting the miseries and woes of the people.please keep it up.

The cry of a heart which is unable to see the pain, sorrow and inequality and injustice in the world..................Good Write in rhymes............10+++...........

The cry of a heart which is unable to see the pain, sorrow and inequality and injustice in the world..................Good Write in rhymes............10+++...........

Everyone was right to give you all tens this is true talent

captivating piece, beautiful...thanks for sharing

A lot of mixed messages I read in this one..a carefree, careless world and the duty of the literay artist..as the job of the poet extends to all literary writers. You are right we capture and record the comings and goings of society but our work should not be as tombstones noting the passings or fantasies but must resonate loud and clear and articuate the path of a better way.

with so many question marks how can I be hungry to steal mirth whatever a lovely write dear akram

Socialism means equal distribution of wealth to all, but unfortunately today it means equal distribution of wants and not of wealth. Everyone is in wants, whether rich or poor. The sky is the limit for wants.

It was very interesting, but in a good way, it made you think. Though I thought some of the rhyming sounded forced, but it was still a very nice poem. I have never really written with rhyme because I always struggle to make ends meet. Keep up the good work! ~Cheers

Fantastic flows of poetic verse, dance along fizzy lines that bubble up with soul, nice penning

this is nice to read becoz of its rhyming words, , the contents are also best fitted for the title..this is great..pleasant to the eyes of readers, , naizz

superb diction and clear fluid poem there is this rebellious streak here too but poets are after all sensitive thinking creatures that feed on the circumstance chew and brew... very very nice cheers...10