You could have been more polite observing me,
Your harsh words have left
An indelible impression,
Hatred can be won by love alone,
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Beautiful use of words. I can relate to what is meant... thank you for sharing.
Wow, wow. Love the way u have played with simple words but bringing out exactly what the heart is feeling.
Nice piece of creative intelligence. I envy u. Kip it coming
this poem reminds me of a saying in my country where your title means the same, i love its simplicity in words.wonderful poem with wise sentences.
Beautiful and amazing. Well done my friend, u have just created a masterpiece! ! ! !
criticism is always hardest to take from someone you love. nicely written
Wow, very impressive! I love the way you describe things. Lovable! I rate it a perfect 10.: -)
Indeed this is a great poem.i dont even how to congratulate you this is a kind of situation which most lovers go through.your poem spoke to all of us who fall a victim to this situation.it not jyst a great poem but an excellent one.THUMBS UP
I had to read it again...and yes I still love it as much as the first time read it. Thank you for posting such a wonderful poem Izzey
it is so good but it is so bad