Saturday, November 27, 2010

*a Humble Complaint* Comments

Rating: 4.4

You could have been more polite observing me,
Your harsh words have left
An indelible impression,
Hatred can be won by love alone,
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir
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hello 10 October 2018

it is so good but it is so bad

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REZA HUNTER LION 29 September 2018

*******REZA HUNTER LION HERO- - - -Go home in ZERO

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Ishan Dwivedi 15 July 2018

Poem with a great stuff

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Rommel Galicia 22 June 2017

very nice poem indeed👍

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Khanyisile Mtshali 21 November 2016

Beautiful use of words. I can relate to what is meant... thank you for sharing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 August 2016

Expressive and impressive composition. Thanks.

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Seema Chowdhury 17 September 2015

A poignant and an expressive write.

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Precia Liz 27 December 2014

nice poem, i liked it...

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Akhtar Jawad 26 June 2014

Nice idea, nice poem.

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Bothwell T Murindagomo 09 April 2014

Wow, wow. Love the way u have played with simple words but bringing out exactly what the heart is feeling.

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Nyagaka Charles 07 January 2014

real life...lovely piece.

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Moses Olarotimi 29 February 2012

Nice piece of creative intelligence. I envy u. Kip it coming

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Diamond Williams 10 January 2012

B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L...WELL WRITTEN

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Eva Saldana 10 January 2012

Exellent! ! :) i loved it. 10

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Dickens Joseph Sawo 08 January 2012

this poem reminds me of a saying in my country where your title means the same, i love its simplicity in words.wonderful poem with wise sentences.

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Nadood Al Nasser 17 November 2011

Beautiful and amazing. Well done my friend, u have just created a masterpiece! ! ! !

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Marcus Mckinley 17 October 2011

criticism is always hardest to take from someone you love. nicely written

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Scarlett Blades 10 October 2011

Wow, very impressive! I love the way you describe things. Lovable! I rate it a perfect 10.: -)

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Benjamin Dotse 07 October 2011

Indeed this is a great poem.i dont even how to congratulate you this is a kind of situation which most lovers go through.your poem spoke to all of us who fall a victim to this situation.it not jyst a great poem but an excellent one.THUMBS UP

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I had to read it again...and yes I still love it as much as the first time read it. Thank you for posting such a wonderful poem Izzey

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir

Mohammad Akmal Nazir

Bahraich, U.P. India
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