A Humble Advice Comments
Look at the glowing golden Sun
Brightens up the world with radiant beam
Never stops his shine even for fun
Ever stands as a leader of the team
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An insightful rendition set aside for sober reflection. A well texted and nicely thought out piece graced with beautiful rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing.
Life is not a funny game Every moment is challenge to tame Wisely choose the future road Expand your horizon much more broad..... a marvelous advice to your son and to all young ones.......take future in your hands and rely on God............. God bless you for this advice. tony
Always keep the spirits up Success would surely round you up! Very appropriate advice of a worthy mother to a worthy son.
QUOTABLE LINES! ! ! Life is not a funny game Roads to reach the goals are hard Wisely choose the future road Expand your horizon much more broad Always keep the spirits up Success would surely round you up!
Great! This is a good moral instruction. I like it, keep writing
The humble advice to your son is for all children.An inspiring poem taking inspiration from the Sun.Really nice and enjoyable.Thanks and best wishes.
Great advice. Good analogy. Wish that everyone were as happy and radiant as the sun.
Equal portions of joy and wisdom. A dash of cute, coy, and hope... a heady stew.
It's a flow-er that makes me want to flower. I am inspired to keep my spirits up. Micmac
Wonserful flow and well expressed.I liked this poem very much Rekha
Wow! thats the best advise i've ever heard...i just love it, , , ,
Wow! its the best advise i've ever heard.....i just love it...
Great work! I love it! What a blessing for your son to have a poet mother like this! Well, maybe I should try one for my daughter, too.
So true... this is really a very good advice :) I loved the lines 'Patience is the key to win Tolerance will take you far from sin'
Well done, how your words are very expressive as a great caring mother.Also all your advices are with a very elegant way.Your words are so simple so easy to find its way to your son's heart.With all my pleasure and honor accept me as one of your friends.
Great Motherhood the Original Bharath Civilzation that was in-built each and every mothers not in other places in the world once again thanks Ma 10+++
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7/19/2025 11:43:22 AM # 1.0.0
Patience is the key to win Tolerance will take you far from sin Always keep the spirits up Success would surely round you up! teaching virtues and finding joy in it...... you are spiritual. tony