A Human Being Comments

Great write sir! In our scramble to achieve and survive, we lose ourselves...life indeed has to be lived!

Over the years Jon has inspired all of us at one time or the other. A great tribute to him and his many poetic talents, just as you have demonstrated you talent in this poem. Well written and well described, we all learn from each other. Great Poem. Your friend Lynn

as you said there are no two sides to happiness, either you are happy or you are not. great write!

Well life is different for everyone...but we all want our own sanctum to cuddle our loved one's and call it home...and live by nobody's rule of thumb except god's. The happiness call is refreshing regards

This appears like a confession of a disappointed soul.

YOur last two lines are so true, many seem to get lost in competition, instead taking life as it comes. We should take the flow of life to its completion. Happiness is inside all of us just waiting to be seen. A great write Samanyan.