Friday, August 21, 2009

A Huge Tree Comments

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a huge tree
in its shade
a rider travels
for one hundred years
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Ahmad Shiddiqi
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Nikunj Sharma 01 September 2009

to travel under the shade, or be the tree itself that's the question, god please help.... Ahmad bhai...this is indeed a deep poem, few words though, yet a world of wisdom in them....

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Juan Carlos Abeti 01 September 2009

very deep one, good job again, i beleive that trere`s more in it....

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Catrina Heart 29 August 2009

succinct piece in profoundness.............Thanks!

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 29 August 2009

very good. all trees must have deeper foundations in order to last long!

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Surya . 28 August 2009

a god poem, giving reality in life.but we shoul know that every one has limitations too. for the spider(rider?) it isnt necessary to cross it. voted10 surya

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Kuji Soliman 28 August 2009

this is a very nice one, i read it but attentivly and i tried to understand it and i did, i loved it!

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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