Saturday, October 12, 2013

A Housewife Nay! Comments

Rating: 5.0

I was never one for housework, nay,
Not me, Goodness gracious, ME? No way!
I love to learn how to be sharp and bright,
To be a writer or a poet - out of sight!
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Mai Murphy Venn
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Pollie Frampton 29 September 2015

Nice work, Mai! Its charming and witty, it made me smile :) My sentiments exactly. We've all wished for someone to come in and to take over the housework, it's good to have dreams. Well done! !

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Fabrizio Frosini 29 September 2015

a truly nice poem.. an Irish 'bardo' you are, Mai :) Cheers

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Kanniappan Kanniappan 12 October 2013

Hi, I read your poem 'A Housewife Nay! '. Nice poem and good idea. You said 'My maid would do it all for me'. But if your maid also says the same, what will you do? Your score is only 17. If you cross 100, what will you say? I thought the above in the lighter vein. V.K.Kanniappan

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