A House Wife's Prayer Comments

FAITH KEEPS THOSE THAT KEEP THE FAITH - Mother Teresa. A lovely poem well penned to capture its essence and the poet's fate, hope, aspirations, and total submission to the WILL OF GOD. I like the articulation of the poem. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

A very beautiful and realistic view of Motherhood, she is a teacher and has inner strength, sharpening minds and spirits at length. Really wonderful tribute to Mothers everywhere, you can tell this poem was written by a person with deeply held and felt convictions. Thank you for this gracious poem. RoseAnn

beautiful write.flow and wordplay is so sweet.liked it.

An adage in West Bengal, ‘there can be bad kids but never bad Mom’ …indeed Mother is all time greatest …great tribute to Mothers’ emotive side to all … thanks for sharing Hon’ble Poet Subbaraman-ji Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

I can very clearly relate to this prayer! Very well written. The last lines are the best: Grant me wisdom, love and patience Make my sweet home abode of Providence!

Bless me serve my neighbor well Whose wards look upto me to tell All they need to stand with strength And sharpen their mind and spirit in length Grant me wisdom, love and patience Make my sweet home abode of Providence.....when you have good eduation, you look forward for other's betterment.. it is divinelamp that enlightens you thinking... you think of makinghome as heaven and dream for making it abode of providence...i loved thepoem....10 read mine..educations makes

really wonderful and highly motivating poem voted10 surya

I agree with Smt.Indira Ranganathan, another great poet.....prayers of houselady can bless all the members of family....you have done it so wonderfully...10

yes a woman always puts everyone's needs before hers. but hi she too needs some me time and space. good poem

A prayer of an ideal feminine to Providence not for personal boons but to beget an unselfish mind and body to serve one’s own and others…a poem delivering a good message *10*

Receptive work, does she get time to offer a prayer, loaded with mundane affairs, oh it is brilliant she feels for people around, prays for all, toils for all, bestow love and kindness, thank you for sharing this. A realistic great work

She is the mother sister friend teacher and guide.........all in one

Well structured verse with a great flow to it. Andrew

This is really great... i luv the way u find hope and beauty in everthing being done... good job

Beautiful. Yet again you have created a unique flowing verse... this time with a definitive mood of happiness and hope... thankyou :)

I think you got It This poem is a masterpiece You seem to had more time to write it I feel that you were more relaxed when you wrote it I got the feeling that you don't handle stress very well And when you have stress you don't write well

lovely subb. children are the gifts of god.