Tuesday, September 13, 2005

A House On Gold Street Comments

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I have memories from
When I was a child
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Richard Dorrough
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Madhurii Ball 13 September 2005

This is full of sadness. Hope it is'nt completely autobiographical. Nice connection at the end with the leading lines, the grey shutters, again. A disciplined poem, too, managing the orderly 4 line stanzas well. If this is a story of a child's broken dreams, poetry is a healing force, so best wishes for the art of recovery.

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