This is full of sadness. Hope it is'nt completely autobiographical. Nice connection at the end with the leading lines, the grey shutters, again. A disciplined poem, too, managing the orderly 4 line stanzas well. If this is a story of a child's broken dreams, poetry is a healing force, so best wishes for the art of recovery.
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This is full of sadness. Hope it is'nt completely autobiographical. Nice connection at the end with the leading lines, the grey shutters, again. A disciplined poem, too, managing the orderly 4 line stanzas well. If this is a story of a child's broken dreams, poetry is a healing force, so best wishes for the art of recovery.