A house near the hill
Lit up when a sunbeam broke
Through the alto clouds.
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Picturesque! This lovely haiku paints the colourful picture right before our eyes. Marvellous.5* &my fav
I am reminded of just such scenes! Thank you for sharing your gift of words.
Most beautiful Haiku, loveliest said, this gem touched my very heart and it still touches deepest inside. Myriad of Stars I pluck from the Galaxy, this gem deserves higest respect for the eyes dicovers this finest scene amongst the busy doings of the world..Thank you for sharing this Haiku gem
oh, but you painted such a beautiful scene with your palette of words and deft pen---top stars, my friend!
And ever so beautifully painted! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++
Such a beautiful heart touching poem! .. With such beautiful emotion and feelings in this! ..
Not only a most fantastic presentation, but this is a most beautiful haiku, a well captured naturalistic painting as seen and observed from your beautiful mind's view.5 Stars full on Top. I have been watching this gem for hours
Brilliant and insightful lines! Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.
I can just picture this in my mind good write Rose Marie Juan Austin
Very visual and lovely. Your amazing poem captured a beautiful moment so marvelously.
Who is living inside this beautiful house? except for our beloved poet Rose, the poet who deals meticulously and sensibly with the nature, she takes the most beautiful pictures of the universe and making them in words, where the cameras cannot reach those scenes, a big 10 and onto my fav list
Well penned