Tuesday, December 29, 2009

A House Is The Building Or Structure In Which One Lives Comments

Rating: 5.0

Just escape from this building
That's colliding; its walls, fading black
Walk to somewhere away from this memory
Wipe aside tears that threaten departure
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Achim Wollscheid
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Wow, this is an amazing poem. It is full of vivid words and I can see it play in my head like a scene. Great descriptions. Wonderful job! *~Layla Stone~*

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Achim Wollscheid

Achim Wollscheid

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