Tuesday, June 6, 2006

A House Is Not A Home Comments

Rating: 4.4

They adorn these walls as ugly ornaments:
Invisible trails of vermin
Painted with the bile of bitterness
for all to see.
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COMMENTS
Xavier Thomas 19 January 2023

Beloved, this sounds like my family, unearthly unable to peek into the vibrance of life, but oh so willing to imitate it in unwholesome and ignorant visages of prosperity. Vanity of vanities, all is vanity on the earth

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Ashraful Musaddeq 19 September 2008

A poem with diverse taste. Enjoyed.

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Kefentse Sathekge 05 October 2007

i love the way you play with words.

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Erhard Hans Josef Lang 09 August 2006

...comes in different settings, this theme...and yours is very well-presented!

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BEAU GOLDEN 22 June 2006

words can be like the wind, the breeze is so soothing and I thoroughly enjoyed reading that one! loved the ending!

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Chukuemeka Akpe

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Lagos, Nigeria
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